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CommentAuthoracousticsam
- CommentTimeFeb 6th 2007
http://www.acousticsam.com/rage/
This is the design for my current freelance project (so far, at least).
Any comments or suggestions for improvement? Please, be honest!
(The tell-a-friend link is the only one that is functional right now)
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CommentAuthorDENiAL
- CommentTimeFeb 6th 2007
Not to bad.
Some ideas for you...
The header image is rather large, so I understand trying to keep the file size down. However, the splatter looks bad, here's a link to an article aboutOptimizing images for the web
Besides that, the only other thing I would change, well not change, but add, is a hover for when you mouse over images.. Just a simple dark grey border would be fine.
Good job overall though! -
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CommentAuthoreurogrande
- CommentTimeFeb 6th 2007
I think your design looks great. The only thing I would change is the orange sub header. Maybe you want to change it to gray . -
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CommentAuthorbradm81
- CommentTimeFeb 6th 2007
I actually like the orange subheader and would say, if anything, make it brighter (like #FC0 instead of #F93) and involve it more in the overall design. I think you've done a good job porting 20pirates' awesome design, but if you've lost anything, I think it's that boldness of multiple colors. What if you added some orange splat to the header? You could then even involve some orange in the navigation so that it's not just graytone and red. -
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CommentAuthorjanpd24
- CommentTimeFeb 6th 2007
I think it's rather nice, though a hover on the images and the links in the text would be good. -
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CommentAuthorwebmasterneo
- CommentTimeFeb 6th 2007
Posted By: eurograndeI think your design looks great. The only thing I would change is the orange sub header. Maybe you want to change it to gray .
I agree. Maybe a very light gray (#eee) or white.
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- CommentAuthorslickopr1
- CommentTimeFeb 6th 2007
I like it. Almost makes me feel young again.
I would keep the orange but put an image background with the same uneven edges like the other ones. -
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CommentAuthoracousticsam
- CommentTimeFeb 11th 2007
Thank you all for your criticisms! I decided to stick with the orange subheader, and incorporate that colour throughout the design a little more.Posted By: bradm81make it brighter (like #FC0 instead of #F93)
bradm81, I tried brightening it, as you suggested, but it clashed with the colour scheme and didn't really fit.Posted By: slickopr1I would keep the orange but put an image background with the same uneven edges like the other ones.
I tried it out with a jagged bottom border, and it looks great!
I've done a hover on the lightbox images, as well as the inline links.Posted By: DENiALThe header image is rather large, so I understand trying to keep the file size down. However, the splatter looks bad
I tried raising the picture quality, but it made the file size around 120kb! Any other suggestions? I'm using Paint.NET. -
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CommentAuthorRobobuilder
- CommentTimeFeb 11th 2007
You can send me the file full quality, and I'll save it for web in Photoshop. -
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CommentAuthoracousticsam
- CommentTimeFeb 11th 2007
Thanks, Robobuilder. Check your email.
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